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Eternal Time

Time sweeps by
Caressing your empty mind
Eternity awaits you
Ashes redeem you
Life escapes
Death is but the past
Your soul, gone
Body, perished
Senses are no more
Hell has just begun.

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  • Spiritual Nature
    June 19, 2008

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    You are astounding! Just love your work. Please keep writing, you owe it to the world.

    BLESSINGS,
    Doris


  • reymysterio
    June 7, 2008
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    i love the title eternal time it makes thos poem attractive well done great job


  • Dreamana
    May 31, 2008

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    This is a great write, but I will be honest in that it speaks more of death than hell to me.

    Thank you for entering.


  • toomysterious
    May 31, 2008
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    An eerie concept indeed.