hell
it hurts like hell
the dying children in Somalia
the poverty in India
remember hurricane Katrina
yet says the lord "do not be afraid for i am with you"
hell
it hurts like hell
evil deeds
becomes many men creed
many men bleed for the right to bleed
yet says the lord "i will be with you unto the end"
hell
it hurts like hell
the injustice to those who where hanged by rope
the children traffic going on in Europe
mom who murdered children, blame the devil, and now cant cope
yet says the lord "come to me and ill give you rest"
hell
it hurts like hell
the priest who molested the children
the messenger who falsely claimed to be a brethren
those who neglected, confused, or never came to a conclusion
yet the says the lord "seek while i may be found"
hell
it hurt like hell
men gave up, or attempt to burn the cross
men distaste and repudiate Jesus
men embraces evil, fleshly lust
yet says the lord "
hell
it is hell
the lord is silent
alsmost as if he subsied from existence
hope vanish with every bit of chance
A contest entry
- Quickie - About Hell by Dreamana.
300 points, ended May 31, 2008, 9 entries
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Comments
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This is fine except that its rather outside of the ten line limit. If you can take a part of it that fits, or wish to re-write then feel free.

