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Music of the Ocean

My heart beats faster with anticipation.

My ears strain to hear the roar of waves.

My nose flares to smell the sweet salt air.

My body and soul propel forward to feel the energy exchange of breaking waves and sand.

A symphony of complete release of the body and soul to the music of the sand and sea.

Vibrations moving higher to astral planes far above; cleanses spirit and body as blue water washes over me.

 

 

 

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  • Uglyblackdog
    June 3, 2008
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    This poem made me feel like I was one with the ocean and waves...I could feel it