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"Hell", is the life we live, only seeing "God" threw the eyes of the editors.

This life we live is hell,

our minds plauged with questions,

the answers just out of reach,

but still to far away to grasp,

our minds always want,

that which they can not have,

and we never know what we have,

untill we have lost it,

knowing not what is next,

but wishing and dreading the passing.

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My view is far more complex then this, the above is just the introduction, comment or send me a message if you wish to see "hell" as I see it

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im bad with spellng sry plz check 4 me

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  • Moon Dancer
    August 4, 2008

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    the answers just out of reach,
    but still to far away to grasp,
    Wonderful Phrase, You really know how to describe things
    our minds always want,
    that which they can not have,
    and we never know what we have,
    untill we have lost it,
    This was my favorite Part of the poem B/C it is so true


  • Dreamana
    May 31, 2008

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    Life sure can feel like hell sometimes... but we often attribute the name of that place to situations which in all fairness are way off the mark. Its so true that we usually fail to appreciate what we have until its gone.
    TY for your entry


  • toomysterious
    May 31, 2008

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    You have some good concepts here and nice form. BTW thats why God created spell check and dictionaries.