To allure a presence
moving perfectly her postures
in eternal elegance
like wind, land, fire, aqua
with a gracious beauty,
aesthetics, freshness,
throbbing in lacy rhythms,
affirmation of femininity,
comprehensive.
Author notes
Prompt: thirty words depicting grace and elegance
Elegance,
thy form is pure;
frolicking in the very air,
overwhelming those
with whom
you
grace with
your presence.
Impressed upon your surroundings,
touch never forgotten.
Elegance, thy
name is
fire.
by~ TheSilverQuill
A contest entry
- A Dash of Elegance by VoltaicHypnosis.
300 points, ended June 12, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Ah so sweet thankyou for including my poem also thats very kind of you. I like the message of this poem and the fantastic effort, but I feel a poem of elegance should read smooth and elegantly, like silk. This to was more like satin, beautiful but rough underneath. A fine effort and good luck to you in my contest
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wow, my friend this is elegant indeed, a joy to read
good luck in the contest
Cin
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