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Disaster Area

What Kind of world are we living in?
It is so twisted and broken
But we have the power
To change the disaster area

What is this profanity?
Desecration. Loss of love.
What is this humanity?
We put before Gods eyes.

Fight the hate as hard as we can
bring god forth to every man
show them peace and love
let you be their judge

We have the power to change the
Disaster area.

Have faith in him tell him what we want
Take his hand dont put up a front
Let his light fill our eyes
So we cry out for forgiveness and replace them with his love

What has this world come to? Just look around
The governments hypocrisy, is this democracy?

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  • LittleAnn
    June 12, 2008
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    Thank you for entering my contest and sorry it's taking me so long to finish this...

    I really like the message in this poem... I like how you don't only mention all the negative things but also what can be done to make a change.

    Thanks again and keep on writing!
    Annie

  • Going Forever
    June 2, 2008
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    this is a wonderful poem

    sun-angel

    you can also add comments too my poems too


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    May 31, 2008

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    words of wisdom,

    so much commonsense,

    what seems so simple

    to love,

    can it be any easier!

    powerful message.

    God bless...