What Kind of world are we living in?
It is so twisted and broken
But we have the power
To change the disaster area
What is this profanity?
Desecration. Loss of love.
What is this humanity?
We put before Gods eyes.
Fight the hate as hard as we can
bring god forth to every man
show them peace and love
let you be their judge
We have the power to change the
Disaster area.
Have faith in him tell him what we want
Take his hand dont put up a front
Let his light fill our eyes
So we cry out for forgiveness and replace them with his love
What has this world come to? Just look around
The governments hypocrisy, is this democracy?
A contest entry
- For everyone who has not yet won any trophy by LittleAnn.
600 points, ended June 12, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Thank you for entering my contest and sorry it's taking me so long to finish this...

I really like the message in this poem... I like how you don't only mention all the negative things but also what can be done to make a change.
Thanks again and keep on writing!
Annie


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this is a wonderful poem
sun-angel
you can also add comments too my poems too

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words of wisdom,
so much commonsense,
what seems so simple
to love,
can it be any easier!
powerful message.
God bless...




