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Thinkin' Of You

' of you as I will think of any other people in my life.
Your not special your great but my family and friends are cool too. They are great.
When I am ' of you I couldn't think of anything else.
Your a wonderful man.
A wonderful in my world believe it or not it's true.
Think' of you when your sleeping or a wake.
I wonder what he is doing tonight.
Was he bored? If he is bored he can talk to me and ask good questions.
So someone can see that he is alive.
Everyone should show thereself.
 Their alive believe me your making yourself like their not you think you are better then them?
I can trac the way to think of you.
' of you is also part of my homework.
 It's not all a lie. It's not a lie at all.
  If I was ' of you I would show you meaning of real love.
Thinkin' of you it's like I moved on from something to you.
I am watching you because I am thinkin' of you.

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Written December 26th, 2003

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  • BitterDreamer
    December 28, 2003
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    Hey, now this one I like very much..and I can understand what your stay..lol thanks for sharing!
    ~BitterlySweet~