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The touch of April











Autumn days shone
brilliant blue,
the day fate
touched destiny

humoring age,
along with hearts,
leaving white
clouds of hope














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  • Angelflower
    September 15, 2008

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    this had a harmony to it.. don't know why but it did. as well as a bit of laughter, though a touch of thoughtful sadness.. again, that is just me.. Thanks much for sharing..


    Angel


  • Cannonsfire
    June 1, 2008
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    Birthday month for me, Ugh!!! The end of a year in so many more ways that one!Love, C


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    May 31, 2008
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    just lovely.... x


  • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
    May 31, 2008

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    aww this is so brilliant for the prompt, says so much Juls


    Hope you do well with it



    Cin


  • sailor ptolema
    May 31, 2008

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    BRAVO!

    this is such a lovely right, it feels like you are floating on cloud when you read it... enhancing the meaning

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