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growing out of last trimester

a blade of grass like hair
at crowning head

placenta last seen,
tye dyed peasant dress~
pulled nourishment now

as sky by new shirt


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good luck isn't the glue; Isaiah 65:11

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  • Lavender Butterfly
    May 31, 2008
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    truly thought provoking... x


    • Bams
      May 31, 2008
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      you prompted significance not only for my situation

      Lavender Butterfly I enjoyed the confluence

      I appreciated the contest opportunity to tap into the prompt a bit, with a new fourth month concept...

      thanks for highlighting an aim of my write,
      babies are my subject