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You Make Me Sick

Go ahead girl, think you won a prize.
He’s not worth gold,
I wouldn’t even give him bronze.
He’s the fourth place winner,
Who only gets honorary mention.
When he looks you in the eyes,
And tells you he loves you,
Remember you’re the only one feeling it.
He throws the word love around,
Likes its nothing, it means nothing to him.
I thought he had a heart,
Maybe one time he did.
He has nothing but a cold stone,
Resting where his heart used to be.
Just watch yourself girl,
The only thing he’s good at is breaking hearts,
telling lies and running from his problems.
I saw potential in him,
Like I’m sure every girl before me has.
But then he finds a new girl,
And leaves you with nothing.
He wont care that you cry every night,
Wont give a damn that you cant sleep.
All he cares about is himself.
That much I have learned.
If you don’t believe me,
Ask the girls before me.
He does the same thing,
Over and over like a never ending cycle.
He makes you feel amazing,
But when your not looking,
He’s going behind you back telling another girl,
Everything he tells you.
Once a cheater,
always a cheater.
Keep that in mind sweetheart.
Just remember people don’t change.
But maybe you’ll get lucky,
Maybe he wont leave you high and dry.
But if he does,
I’m so sorry my friend,
But please join the club.

Author notes

"The sweeter the apple, the blacker the core, scratch a lover, fine a foe."

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  • fairytalelovestory
    September 5, 2008
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    great poem, great take, good luck


  • Simply Simple
    June 7, 2008

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    Hahahaha... Sounds like so many guys I know.

    Thanks for the entry and best of luck in the contest.

    I rather enjoyed reading this.