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November's trees

Trees sway in breezes
while leaves fall in surrender
squirrel chatters complaint

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  • individuality gold member
    May 31, 2008

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    a good poem penned, ah those squirrels, they do tend to complain a lot don't they, i saw one the other day in the shop moaning about the price of nuts


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    May 31, 2008
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    Such a cleverly creative little haiku... x