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Fall's End



Stress edifying on wretchedness,
within this disorderly mind.

Aiding poignant poisons,
arresting,
ceasing,
heart’s faithful Thanksgiving thumping.



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Prompt: I can't feel November
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  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    May 31, 2008
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    Deeply profound and incredibly thought provoking... x