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roman nine months

moved to heavier meaning
lingering turn

no one complimented me on my ponytail
looking like earrings either

except me in the mirror






Author notes

good luck isn't workable; Isaiah 65:11

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except roses/bird types, as nods by nature's...

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  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    May 31, 2008

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    How immensely creative and sincerely thought provoking. Did you mean ponytail ~ you have pontail... x


    • Bams
      May 31, 2008
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      I appreciated your eye

      Lavender Butterfly I have a jump of thanks

      I did enjoy delving into reasons of this unrealness or surrealness, and your reading and rewarding.

      I liked the contextual stimulus,
      babies are my subject


    • Bams
      May 31, 2008
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      LB typo fixed...

      thanks, I did reread it but I guess was dazed too ~
      Bams