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New life

The butterfly wings start to beat

I hope neither one of us get cold feet

the day is coming up so fast

try to forget worries from the past

 

so happy to marry him

bubbling with joy

spilling over the rim

hoping this isn't some horrible ploy

 

awaiting the day

when 'I do' I will finally say

the first kiss as his wife

holding him close the rest of my life

 

rocking his babes to sleep each night

loving him as a husband and a wonderful dad

enjoying how his touch does excite

so happy that he is the one to be had.

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  • storiesuntold gold member
    October 14, 2008

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    Beautiful write

    Oh if one truly looked at a bride in the sunrays of the day all could see her halo such a vision indeed


  • Raptur3
    July 22, 2008

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    AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW, this was soooooooooo sweet. You can really feel the love in this. Is this based on a true story b/c if it is, then CONGRATZ!!!