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Your Silent Guardian

I'll catch you when you fall
And set you on your feet....
I'll lend you my shoulder
If you need help to stand....

I'll be the one to hold you
As the tears stream down your cheeks
I'll push aside my problems
To help you with your own

I'll be strong just for you
To lend you the strength you need....
I'll wipe the tears away
And try to make you smile....

I'll do whatever it takes
To make everything alright....
I'll give you my attention
So we can talk all night....

I'll be there when you call
At your side I'll appear....
I'll chase your pain away
Your silent guardian....

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  • DawnKestrel
    November 2, 2008

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    This is a really nice poem.
    Good luck in my contest!


  • LadyLuff
    September 10, 2008

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    Excellent write.
    I loved it because it has a nice flow of emotion and love within it
    caring for one is like caring for all!!
    aww

    Lovely write

    ~LadyLuff~


  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    May 31, 2008

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    This is well written. There is a lot of depth to the words, and emotion really pours from them. I have one piece of advice, and it has nothing to do with your writing.... don't stay silent! Time may pass you by before you get the true chance to let it go. Speak up no and have no regrets later.

    Enjoy your stay at AP. If you need anything, feel free to IM me.
    Keep expressing through writing.
    Storm