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Left In November's Snow

Icicle fingers
     prod ashes,

stirring
     deadened coal,

attempting
     to quench thirst,

of an incinerated heart,
     left in November's snow














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Prompt: I can't feel November

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  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    May 31, 2008

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    Aww so sad, I felt this one deeply....
    Beautifully expressed as always!!


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    May 31, 2008
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    How deeply creative and beautifully compelling... x