Mortality meanders,
while bones tattoo,
feathery paper skin.
Screaming vivacious coercion,
but alas,
we, the undead, live ceaselessly,
eluding fatality.
Author notes
20 words
Prompt - Avoiding humanity
A contest entry
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Comments
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nicely done
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very successful
the poems style was very atractive, it caught the eye and made me want to read it. it was a very creative piece for such few words.
good luck in the contest,
keep writing,
holly x -
EXCELLENT POEM!
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YES! This IS what I was looking for!
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