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Conveying Depiction

When I write I vision a painter’s strokes of emotions
Flowing up and down, side to side
Sometimes movements of smooth serenity
But times where the hand strikes in quick passion

When I write I try to portray with my words
What a potter orchestrates with his hands
The slightest movement of delicate fingers
Carving imagination into dimension

When I write I dream of a sculptor
How each hit of the chisel molds the aspects
Each straight edge and curvy line
Creates a rendering of imagery

When I write I think of how a picture
With one click, captures a memory forever
Freezing for a moment truthful emotion
Evidence of life and experience

When I write I imagine a singer
And how she breathes from her soul
Emotions pouring out in every lyric
In every note, in every pitch

When I write I envision the reader
In whom my words will evoke sensation
A heart’s passion of sympathy
And a mind’s determination of action

When I write I hope to release
To inspire and infuriate
Reactions of rage and craze
Delivering myself through difference
To you

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  • Amana Araya Jabari
    November 6, 2008
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    WOw thats all I can say. WOOOOWWWW

  • Bleached-Roses
    May 31, 2008

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    Simply amazing. Your words paint beautifully accurate visions of the people represented in each stanza. I could see them all with an appreciation of their trade.