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atone, running deep
is your love
for her,
and she keeps
mimicking shadows
to hide the comfort
of affection.
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A contest entry
- Silenced by October by Lavender Butterfly.
400 points, ended May 31, 2008, 7 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - xx Short Poems. May The Best ShortWrite Win! xx by xxRainbowDawnxx.
700 points, ended March 31, 103 entries
Honorable mention
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ang sarap talaga basahin nito
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Ahhhh this is beautiful.
Very expressive, just exactly what I have been going through, if you change her into him. -
that is one awesome poem true talent you have sir
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Wow, you say so much. I love the last bit, but all of this is brilliant.
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This one touched me, Hensley... now it's my turn to say that it makes my heart weep silently.
So much said in so few words. Lovely poetry.
~ Nicolette
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this is beautiful...it's like almost falling in love itself...it's sensuality is very discrete as the shadows
giving the love
and she getting the love
there's this certain balance
although not mutually reciprocated
nang-iimagine lang ba ako
o in love lang talaga ako hehe
i guess this is my favorite so far
sobrang nagandahan ako sa kanya
though it may sound so sugar coated to say
i find it very enigmatic maybe it's because of the silence
ewan ulit lol
Anna Lee
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Such beauty. You always help my heart skip beats in pure awr.
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Loving someone is your one and only vulnerability, ergo never could figure out Harry Potter's strength!
Beautifully written! I do that often; mimicking shadows
to hide the comfort of affection.
Congratulations on the silver!
God Bless!
Anansey
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just fabulous... x
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