The whoosh, whoosh
of the waves break
upon the sand,
crunch, crunch of shells
under feet.
Somewhere in the distance
the storm rages,
the sea swells,
Yet, I walk on the beach,
and my heart is at ease,
in the dark of the clouds,
the cool evening breeze.
A contest entry
- About the ocean by Uglyblackdog.
450 points, ended June 3, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - A Peaceful Easy Feeling by davidwright.
600 points, ended June 15, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Beach poems offer great opportunities to create a feeling of peace. Very nicely done. Thanks for your entry and happy trails
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this gives me the feeling of walking along the beach on a stormy day!!
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Anything about the ocean and walking along lonesome beaches moves me. I live near the coast and its a great way to find peace.
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