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[ I remember the day we met ]

I remember the day we met
Yet it is kinda hazy
I remember when we became best friends
I remember when you interduced me
To that guy(Deric) I remember
That time at you birthday party
When you fell and we laughed
I remeber when I told all my secrets
I remember when you forgave me
For doing what I did with him
I remember when you showed me
What god can be.
I remember when you told me that you
Were moving and I rememeber how my
World seem to fall apart right then
And there
But most of all I remember
When you left and I cried that
Night I guess I just remember...

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  • storiesuntold gold member
    May 30, 2008
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    Good write

    Check spellling on the eight line the word remember and it will be great