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Ring

magic ring whirls 'round
casting enchantment on all
nature sings grand songs

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Lotr geeks unite, Option #3.

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  • individuality gold member
    May 31, 2008

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    a good poem, i like the musicality here, it resonates with love and smiles, nature's beauty dancing across the earth's spinning tenderness.


  • InMyOwnGlassBox
    May 30, 2008

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    Short and sweet

    This poem is short and sweet, like hobbits! sorry about that, I just came off a major day of lord of the rings-athon. I like this poem, but it seems like something is missing... Oh well, you can revise it if you want, good luck in my contest!