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I Can't Help Falling in Love With You

Whiter than light
my baby she shines so bright
She makes me feel so right
and I’ll be calling on her tonight

My baby brings me such delight
I’m trapped inside her superlative light
Time will drift away into the night
and I won’t ever let her out of my sight

Baby fall into my arms
let me touch you with my charms
Baby take me if you want to
cause I can’t help falling in love with you

My baby she speaks in broken tongue
I remember songs that I have never sung
She could take my mind to the sky
she’s the only girl that could make me cry

My baby takes me by the hand
as we walk together in the ocean sand
I am lost in all of your dreams
we laugh and we cry between our screams

Baby fall into my arms
let me touch you with my charms
Baby take me if you want to
cause I can’t help falling in love with you

Baby don’t cry into the night
I shall stay with you until the morning light
Baby you know this is real
I’m not looking for a way to make a deal

Baby now you so softly sigh
and I never ever meant to make you cry
You are the one upon my mind
your words all reflections of the kind

Baby fall into my arms
let me touch you with my charms
Baby take me if you want to
cause I can’t help falling in love with you
Yes
I can’t help
falling in love with you

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  • Shya
    June 5, 2008

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    This is full of descriptive imagery. I like lines 13-16. Love line 20... good write. A little cliche, and a little long. Good job, and thanks for entering...