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The Strange Feeing

One day

when i looked at you

it was like seeing you for the very first time

but this wasn't anything like

the day I met you

 

I got this strange

unusuall feeling inside me

one that I have never felt before

it may be unusually, mesterous, and new

but it feels so powerful

it is stronger than a friendship

but not yet true love

somebody help me

figure out this strange feeling

 

It was so sudden

it was so fast

i wonder if anyone else

can tell that I am going crasy for you

I am trying so hsrd to hide it

but it just isn't working amy more

I am hooked on you

all because of this strange feeling

 

I came one so fast

with no warning

it is so new to me

I am so scared

I don't want to be the one crying

I need to know

what this

Strange feeling in side of me i s

 

Everything in side of me is changing

I feel so strange a round you

I don't know what to say

anymore

all of these qustains

are running through my head

but the one that is bothering me the most

is,

what is this strange feeling

 

 

 

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  • random-writer
    May 31, 2008

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    Great poem! My first crush, as you know, was on...the dude that started with a B and ended with an NT. I'm so over him now because, as you also know, I like that Andrew dude. LOL. But anyway, the feeling I had with the 'B''NT' person was pretty strong, just like what you felt But then when I went out with the 'B''DON' person, my feelings for him were even stronger. In fact, that strongness has built up so much that right now I could punch him and he'd be in the hospital for a month!!!! LOL. (You know what, I'm even thinking about doing that!) Anyway, nice poem. I'M SO PROUD OF YOU!!!!!!


    • Blondie19
      May 31, 2008
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      Chelsea, why don't you go read Just You Me, Then Him. Or at least some kind of pome like that.Lol


  • DaniClover14
    May 31, 2008

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    my first crush went something like that...HAHA!!! you did an excellent job, girl!!! Keep writing pretty please with Twilight on top!!!