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beauty

trapping me in your deep eyes
with your dressed up pretty lies
beauty at its deadliest i fear
living inside of you my dear
showing how beauty can kill a soul

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  • mysticstorm gold member
    May 31, 2008
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    Nicely written...good flow and depth in your words...well done in brevity...thank you for sharing!