Everything was so good
right when we started.
We had no reason
or need to part.
But then it all fell down
and hit the bottom.
We needed space
and thinking time.
But you keep on calling;
I keep on receiving.
It all became better
once again.
No matter how much
you care for dignity,
you need a hero
for tonight.
But your eyes are blurry
and you can't see that I
seem to need someone
just like you.
You need to realise
that even with broken dreams,
I've come to the rescue
But you need to save me.
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Comments
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This is so very sad, I can really relate to the words you have penned here. I love how the background looks like crumpled uup paper
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WOW!
Kind of a little twist on the normal...I really enjoyed this piece. The last two lines were my favorite. You did a great job telling the story! Love it!
Mylee
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