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monster

I see a monster inside myself
Cant look into my own eyes...cant look you in the eyes
Want to break the mirror, it haunts me
My dark, broken soul is dead
I was scared of myself...but Ive learned to live with it
Supressed anger, hatred
I could fucking kill you...wish death on you without a second thought
Heartless..no emotion...difference between right and wrong gone
I have no remorse and no pity on anyone
I show no mercy on anyone
I will abuse the hell outta you emotionally
Cut your heart into pieces and kill you inside
Dont try to run or hide
You cant resist me therefore Id have an ultimate effect on you
Be very afraid!

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this aint true lol just saw sumthing tht inspired me alot

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  • darkstinger
    June 23, 2008

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    This was nicely written, expressing yourself and warning others not to get to close. Great write.

    Ray


  • GypsyEyes
    June 14, 2008

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    i can totally relate to this poem! great job! thank you so much for entering my contest and i wish you the best of luck! ~CarnalNineTailedFox


  • peridotPixi
    May 31, 2008

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    i can feel the depth in this wonderful flowing deep painful poem, and its really kinda crazy that some1 with such a beauiful outside can even feel like writing something like this, all the power to you, just dont kill anyone, keep up the great writing~your wifey Amy


    • Lonely Christina
      June 1, 2008
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      thank you ! hahaha thanks 4 the beautiful comment but idk my mind is sick and twisted and all together im crazy...IM ME i wont kill neone..yet jk haha love ya girl


  • XNevermindX
    May 31, 2008
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    Hahahaha, someone is pure evil! >=) Lol, i like it.


  • ur-ma-warnd-bout-me
    May 30, 2008
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    ummmm....yeah....i liked it!


  • CharcoalScreams
    May 30, 2008
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    0o0o0 nice

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