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Beauty Through Pain

A toothpick
A button
A string

A girl
A scale
A tape measure

Beauty through pain
Perfection through tears
Happiness through sadness

You say you want to
But is that you speaking...
Or peer pressure?

Think it through...

Skinny...
Yet sad
The point?
None

Is this what you want
Beauty through pain

Think it through...

Anorexia

Author notes

I haven't written anything in such a long time...major writer's block. This isn't the best thing in the world, but it's better than nothing!

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  • storiesuntold
    July 25, 2008

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    Penned with pure perfection

    So true this is and I SAY If it doesnt make you happy then dont do it . I have never seen any that has starved themselves happy they always have a worried look that tells it all .Beuty comes from being healthy
    rosy cheeks a smile and sparkling eyes now if you want to look like a beauty qween then one must eat just eat the proper foods and get out and have fun and the world will be yours for the taking


  • ucancallmereal
    June 2, 2008

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    wow. wow. writers block huh? hehehe..mhm. i believe that

    "A girl
    A scale
    A tape measure"

    dude. just dude. one of the many things i envy about your writing is that you can say so much in very simple words.. its just amazing. great work! there are too many girls that think this way, its so sad.. good write to capture that feeling. its not worth it, your right. luv the name..


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    June 1, 2008

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    Wow.. I can definitely relate to this having battled bulimia in the past.. although that is not so much about being skinny as it is about purging feelings...

    It's so sad to see girls with anorexia, striving to be thin thinking it will make them happy when in fact they're completely miserable!!

    Great write!