Today I saw an eclipse
It was quite an event
But I became sad
Because it only came and went
It was an event of my mind
And my tears reveal
How I truly feel
For what I saw, the words I can't find
I wish the eclipse could come again
It brought me peace I need
And I never know when
God will do this deed
The eclipse was so clear
And yet it made me sad
And made me feel bad
But never wanting it to disappear
Don't feel bad my dear
For there is nothing to fear
For it was only an eclipse
And it was quite an event
For I learned the true meaning of it
And my feelings did truly fit
A contest entry
- Eclipse Contest by SuicidalLover.
300 points, ended August 1, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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For it was only an eclipse
And it was quite an event
For I learned the true meaning of it
And my feelings did truly fit
i love this line soo full on emotion and mystery at the same time great job :]
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Hmm.. I'm unsure as to what I should say, I will need to ponder this work for a while. Oh, and look I finally managed to get out of bed after a full day! Just so you know, I do like it.
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