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Forget Me Not

Forget me not
I beg of you
Forget not of my touch,
My whisper in your ear
My fingers through your hair
As I profess my love
My dedication
My devotion to you
Forget not of the days of silence
Me holding you
Our lounging in a hammock
My soft skin against you
Forget not of the long nights
My fragrance caressing you
Your arms tightly around me
Our lips barely separated,
My closeness to you
Forget me not
I beg of you 

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  • Topaze gold member
    August 12, 2008
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    a very touching piece, very well written. Thank you for your fine entry in this contest.


  • sensualbutterfly
    July 23, 2008

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    So sweet yet so sad. "forget me not I beg of you". We all know that "they" will never be forgotten. Thank you for entering


  • innocence jaded.xx
    July 1, 2008

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    Awww, this is beautiful. I loved the title & the meaning behind this poem.

    "Forget not of my touch,
    My whisper in your ear
    My fingers through your hair"

    Loved those lines. Amazing. Thanks for entering & best of luck to youuu ! ♥


  • Razor-Blade Romance
    June 18, 2008
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    BEAUTIFUL.
    WELL DONE. AN amazing piece !