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With You

With you
I will live and die

With you
I will smile and sigh

With you
I will see the sky

With you
I will pass them by

With you
I will ask not why

With you
I will live and die

With you
There is no goodbye


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  • Draig aine gold member
    December 13, 2008
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    lovely

    very much power in very few words


  • The Voice of Victory
    July 2, 2008
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    Stephanie. Nice short British Poem.
    Great Write Steff. x

  • jaie2007
    May 30, 2008

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    You are a songbird!!!!

    This poem is so different from your recent pieces. However, I feel a jazz rhythm when reading this. You do love poetry extremely well. "With you, there is no goodbye". That's such a heartwarming line!!