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We shouldn't live in shadows.

In shadows is not how we should live,
but it's what we are imprisoned in.
With every acidic drop of water,
the chemicals are getting thicker.
Reflections won't shine for much longer.
But you couldn't care,
no,
you wouldn't dare.
When no one will stand against it all.
The end is closer than just near.
It's only our fault.
Not any other creature that lives.
Blame does not belong on their shoulders.

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  • BHolzner gold member
    December 19, 2008

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    bravo!

    We have taken up all the shadows on our planet with our own. We have filled every corner with our buildings.We have torn down our native plants and trees. We have taken up all the space. Yes, I quite agree, it is my fault and my ancestors fault that this has happened. Can we undo what has been done? Maybe! Maybe this is the end! The end of blame can conquer a new world!

    Bravo!

    Betsy Holzner


  • DolceVito gold member
    October 18, 2008
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    Good write

    ...I've read it several times. true but sad, and deserving