About the Ocean
W. Peter Sanci May 30 / 2008
Well my friends, it’s time to tell you another one of my good stories.
A long time ago I wouldn’t have gotten on a ship, to go on the ocean, if someone would have paid me to
go, but over time I gave in and we went on our first
Caribbean cruise.
What can I say, it was love at first site.
I just loved the motion of the ocean.
I slept better on the seas than in my own bed at home.
Then there’s the food, you can eat all day long,
whatever you want.
Who just doesn’t love that. Then when the sun goes down , there’s all knds of action all over the ship.
There’s the Las Vegas shows in the lounge every night.
There’s dancing all over the ship as well.
My friends, it truly is an enjoyable thing to be
cruising on any ocean.
A contest entry
- About the ocean by Uglyblackdog.
450 points, ended June 3, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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you made me feel like i was back on my caribean cruise as well..great write
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Haha that was a very cute piece. I loved the tone that you used to write it. Please pen many more great poems, or well stories, like this one!
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PukingFarlee !
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Justin !
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Pukingaerie !
what a name, Where ever did you come up with that one ! I just wanted to thanks you so very much for you're very kins words about my poem. It shows you have grea taste. Ha just kidding ! But thanks a lot. I used to be a History / Religion and I used to love teavhing the Mytology sections ! -
Justin !
Why thanks so veru much for you're kind words about my poem !I wasn;t happy with it myself ! But I am very glad that you enjoyed it so much. Thanks again.
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Good !
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