The old abandoned house
filled with a scent of memory
was crying out to me
A feeling of loneliness rushed to me
the emptiness of the house
brought back unwanted memory
Horrible sad memory
a forgotten part of me
hidden in this lonely house
This house holds the memory of another me.
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I really like this one... it is kind of haunting in a way...old abandoned houses bring back thoughts like this. I have known several.
Great write. Keep up the good work! (p.s. i loved the line:"This house holds the memory of another me. ")
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