Your seductive kiss sends chills down my spine
Your tender arms embrace me ever so tightly.
Passion explodes like amber-lit firecrackers
As we let our vulnerable love leak on the earth's surface.
Your delicate fingers caress my starlit waved hair
And your airbrushed opal smirk makes me smile.
As we exchange our love in several ways,
You kiss my silky neck, and I melt like
Candle wax.
Author notes
Contest!
Pic Inspiration for AngelFlower:
http://allpoetry.com/contest/2407569
A contest entry
- Quickie... by Angelflower.
1036 points, ended May 31, 2008, 8 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Let The Sun Shine;;Or The Earth Cool, Happiness And Pain;; All The Same Game (The Best Of The Best) by HereComesTheSun.
575 points, ended August 12, 2008, 32 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Enter Your Best Poem Here, ONE WINNER TAKES ALL by echo-ink.
725 points, ended August 8, 2008, 38 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Tell Me How You Feel..
Comments
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What a truly passionate write! I'm baffled! The description and imagery was so well-done. :]
"Passion explodes like amber-lit firecrackers"
I like this a lot. Very original. Makes me think of the fourth of July. :]
"Your delicate fingers caress my starlit waved hair
And your airbrushed opal smirk makes me smile."
Amazing. The language you use is captivating. I feel the love radiating from this poem like a thousand suns! ^_^ Well deserved trophies. :]
-Lily♥
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I can see why this has won a couple of cups. The last two lines are just amazing!
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nicce work! good luck
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This was just beautiful and I loved it.
But...it's a trophy winner, and so could you please enter something else instead? thanks, PL -
Ooh. I love the last couple of lines. So wonderfully written. I like this write a lot. It made me feel warm and a little melancholy, don't ask me why, because I really couldn't tell you. =]
Good luck in the contest!
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so much imagery
i can just remember a kiss like that reminding me of so much... great job connecting to yourself and your audience great job, deff. in finalist list
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Nicely done
I love kisses that send chills down my spine. -
Oh, so good! Your airbrushed opal smirk makes me smile
You kiss my silky neck, and I melt like Candle wax. What a description. It sends chills down my spine to read this sort of romantic poetry.
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Great job.
Very good.
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Wow
As we let our vulnerable love leak on the earth's surface.
This line could be a story on it's own. Very sexy poem for such young imagination. I can that poetry is your talent.
Terry
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"ever so"
watch out for those words,
they always stick out to me in poems,
and put me off.
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Wow, wonderfully passionate write here, lovely. Congratulations on the silver!
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wow... this was just amazingly sensual..
The imagery here was just so great!!
It was soft yet wickedly tempting at the same time..
I really loved this.. You did a wonderful job..
Thank you very much for sharing.
Best of luck..
Angel
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This was amazingly creative and well written.. I really enjoyed reading it.
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I love your closing line. Great inspiration from the picture, best of luck in the contest.
♥
whisper
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