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In Homage to Shakespeare ( Romeo and Juliet )

Mab
is the Queen
of the fairies;
on her spider-legs chariot
she jumps
from one night to another
beyond the limits
of the allowed time,
crossing
all lovers' mind
to make them dream
of Love.
Mab
is the Queen
of the tricks;
through the fogs
formed
by the sighs mist,
she makes the world
drunk of madness,
she weaves the spirit winds
turning Romeo's tears
into a fresh morning dew drops,
while
Juliet dreams
under a moon petal
new stories
kissed by the sun.

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  • Fantastic! I don't care so much for the story of Romeo and Juliet, but I really like how you sort of ran off of the Mercutio Queen Mab Speech (one of my fav. parts vy one of my fav. characters) Excellent! The rhythm is also very good.


    • Marvins
      June 1
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      You know , also for me Mercutio is one of the favourite characters of Shakespeare's Romeo and Juliet. I appreciate your comment. Marvin

  • Marvins
    May 30
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    thanks for your comment James119. Marvin.