Alone at last
passion consumes us
From the moment we kiss
there is no hesitation
Breathing rapidly with lust
clothes come off
Bodies writhing
sweat from our sudden heat
Together as one
we reach Nirvana
In a list
A contest entry
- Quickie... by Angelflower.
1036 points, ended May 31, 2008, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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very nicely done! filled with tender romance and yet tastefully done...a nice a read,,thank you
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Thank you
thank you so much, your wonderful comments are much appreciated
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Woot! Yay for Nirvana! hehe... very sexy write..
Love it
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Thank you
Thank you very much. you have inspired me to try to write better sensual pieces
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Ooh.. this was really good.. The imagery and well as the flow was just great!!! you did a wonderful job.. very sensual.. Thank you for sharing..
Best of luck..
Angel
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Thank you
Thank you so much baby sister.
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HOT!!! Very nice sensual write! I will be back for more!!!
Az
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Thank you
you ladies all have me blushing
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Damn...why can't I find a person like that! Oh wait I know...I keep pushing them away. I'm such a tease.
A sensual poem it sure is. I wish you luck!
~Kystal Angel
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Thank you
*blushing* thank you very much hun, if i was only younger
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