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Kill Your TV

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They say that virtue is its own reward
And I can tell you, brother, it’s true.
You can always be sure your sacrifices
Will go unnoticed by everyone but you.

Don’t expect any parades in your honor.
Don’t expect trophies bearing your name.
Don’t expect any write-ups in the paper.
Don't expect any wild applause or acclaim.

In fact, get used to spending time alone
Far from the hedonistic, fun-loving crowd
Who judge others only by what they can see
And think living means being pushy and loud.

For the more enlightened that you become,
The less you can tolerate ignorant thinking.
But don’t waste your breath and your life
Trying to keep this old barge from sinking.

For honor will forever go unrecognized.
Integrity and honesty still won't matter
In a world that makes gods of celebrities
for the vacant millions lost in TV chatter.

Expect to see vast fortunes showered upon
Egoists who do nothing but dribble a ball
And actors who play great, noble characters
But in real life, aren't very noble at all.

Take a drive down your street some evening
And count the houses with the soft, blue light.
You can be sure nobody in there is growing
Welcoming illness and emptiness with delight.


With so many saying the end times are near,

Who can understand what humanity embraces,

Mindlessly staring while the house burns down.

Monkeys with vacant, expressionless faces.

 

But every now and then, the monkeys will laugh

Because of something the box made them feel.

If it could, the box would return their laughter

For the countless hours they allowed it to steal.

 

Every minute spent in front of the devil's eyeball

Could be spent learning or in meaningful interaction.

There are no Renaissance men like DaVinci today

Because we squander our lives with idol distraction.


Okay, I know I seem very harsh and cynical.
I don't mean to discourage or disenchant.
I'd love to say all is right with the world
But with fools leading us all, sorry, I can't.

 

 

 

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  • mamajoey
    June 1, 2008

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    absolutely brilliant. you've hit the nail on the haed!
    My fav:
    Monkeys with vacant, expressionless faces.

    But every now and then, the monkeys will laugh
    Because of something the box made them feel.
    If it could, the box would return their laughter
    For the countless hours they allowed it to steal


  • RedAquarius
    June 1, 2008

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    Well-done, very well-cone. I think this is agreat point and poem you've penned. There is a difference between a bit of escapism from time to time and spending the greater part of each day locked in front of a glowing box. Lovely!

  • Yvette Champ gold member
    June 1, 2008

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    Liked the irony and humour within this poetic ode re the woe of vegetating in front of the devils eyeball! Especially liked the wordplay within idol. Your rhyme did not seem compromized to me and I enjoyed the rhyme and the reason.

    Perhaps it's not so much the TV or time spent viewing but the programmes chosen, I don't watch a great deal but tend to view the weekly guide and see what is on the history and discovery channels. The TV can be an informative medium, programmes about new inventions, science, politics and study modules to go alongside OU courses.

    I have encouraged my children to be more selective and they and I watch a balance of informative programmes and those for escapism/entertainment. I have noted that people seem to believe that soap characters are real, they will discuss their tv characters dilemma's as if they are genuine problems but will not have a clue about the real problems of others off screen.


    Here in the UK we have to pay an annual fee of £135 to be allowed to watch TV! It's a ludicrous charge and I can envisage the next licence introduced here to be to have a computer, re the internet, it may be a wonderful medium for research, education, communication and creativity but there is an awful amount of pap too. Having said that, sometimes I like the lightweight /lighthearted escapism of some things on the TV and the 'net!


    Your poem is thought provoking as always and pertinent to our society, if only it was as easy to switch off the world by the remote viewing of the " window to the world" which is what I called the TV in my rather odd write re a Martian's appraisal of Earthlings and their habits, must go, there's a programme I'd like to watch



  • YoursTrulyJulie gold member
    June 1, 2008

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    Well...from ONE who has NEVER been known to turn on the "idiot box" I totally agree with what you are saying. There is probably only about 3 things I don't mind watching on TV. Well done and I really enjoyed your write


  • nichtmich silver member
    June 1, 2008

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    Wonderful rhyme, rhythm and pure unadulterated truth. Hilarious too! My only stumbling block was the 2nd stanza, "don't expect." Perhaps something like "Don't expect any parades in your honor/or golden trophies bearing your name." IMO

    I also disagree with some of the nay sayers here, children, the sick and elderly were here a long time before TV. People had no 'boob tube' baby sitters, others wrote letters, read books, knitted or were visited and carried on actual conversations. Of course, the people who visited weren't glued to their own TVs and parents actually played or taught their children games and helped them explore the great outdoors, but hey, that's just me


  • Gwenevere
    June 1, 2008

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    I'm afraid I have to disagree with you on this one in places.Yes, so many watch too much television, especially children but for some it is a life saver.Think of the elderly or very sick who have no contact with the real world.I enjoy tv in moderation and feel that a bit of escapism now and again does us no harm at all, Ros


  • Sara Bellem
    June 1, 2008

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    MASTERPIECE

    This is so true, I couldn't agree with you more. I must say when I read the title I wasn't expecting this but after reading it I can't think of a better and more fitting title!!!! Great Job Uncle Mark, You are a genius, simply a Genius Well Written, but then again, I don't have to tell you that


  • Young Spook
    June 1, 2008
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    This poem vocalizes so very well what I feel about television.


  • CountryCousin
    May 31, 2008
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    A good one.

    But with fools leading our country, I doubt it. Now that is an understatement. Oh how we fall prey to the things that the television shows us. And too many time we think what is written in the newspapers is right. You are so correct in this rant. Good for you.


  • Providence
    May 31, 2008

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    Delightful! I've noticed a recent trend in home furnishings...alters built for televisions, some are elaborately carved, some simple, but they are the centerpiece to the home’s living space and families gather for hours to worship there!

    Wonderful write! Love the line “the box made them feel” seems we’ve come to a point where we’d rather watch a life than live one!

    Ovations!

    Marianne

  • ocerus
    May 31, 2008

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    Well, well, well. Wrote another good one, huh? Well, the rhythm was off a little here and there, but you were making so much sense and making so many good points that I really didn't care. I prefer to think of T.V. as "The New God." I mean, how much time do people spend at church or playing with their kids or friends as compared to the time they spend watching T.V.? You should see the brain-dead zombies we have here in New Haven, CT. They don't even believe in love in the slightest! They think it's all like it is on T.V. and in the movies. God help us! (Hey, where do you live, anyway? [If you don't mind my asking!]) Yours - oce


  • Chuck Johnson silver member
    May 30, 2008

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    And if you think the TV is bad,
    You better think again, my friend.
    For the TV is just a cheap punk,
    compared to the computer in the end.
    That monitor replaces lifes lessons
    for those who ignore the world outside,
    And it replaces all worldly distractions,
    Giving a place for a nerd to hide.

    • Young Spook
      June 1, 2008
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      Hey, I disagree with that. The internet is a wonderful place to learn, to explore, and to build social skills. It's a safe haven for the kid that no one likes, because he can find a kindred spirit on the other side of the world that he would never have met otherwise.

      • Chuck Johnson silver member
        June 1, 2008
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        There is learning in everything, social skills in board games, but learning to cope with life as it really is ... you must walk the walk my friend. My best to you.


    • Mark Rickerby gold member
      May 30, 2008
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      LOL - Yes! "Replaces life lessons". Man, ain't that the truth! I'm going to add this to the poem, if you don't mind. Claudia says, "Hi, Chuck!" Hope you're having a happy Friday night so far. Let's hang out soon!

      Mark


  • klassy lassy
    May 30, 2008

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    You know, I don't think this is a bit funny. More and more I am aware that what we fill our minds with has a great effect on the quality of our lives. The lethargy that comes with the "Boob" tube is one of the biggest regrets I have...for not realizing the sad effect--and the waste of time it is.

    TV desensitizes and it carries a whole plethora of moral issues that nobody wants to address because they are too busy raking in big bucks. I wish there was no TV in my house. Ours is on 24-7 for the most part, and very little of it is worthwhile.

    I also think if you aren't sick to begin with, the commercials place enough power of suggestion out there to make you that way. I see this is under the heading of "Rants." You can add mine to it. ~ Karen

    • Mark Rickerby gold member
      May 30, 2008
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      Actually, this in my list of "rants" already and I didn't label it as "funny". I agree with you 100%. Thanks, Karen. Have a great weekend. (Suggestion - sabotage the TV and pretend you don't know what's wrong with it. lol)

      M


  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    May 30, 2008

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    FUUNY BUT SO TRUE~~

    I know a man who hasn't watched TV since 1972 for all the reasons you have listed above...My husband:f

     

    your words of truth burns the ears of most everyone yet as you have said it is the devils eyeball for sure...thank you kindly for the laugh:))


  • AusStar
    May 30, 2008

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    Brilliant poem!! (of course) I loved the same line as Woodchuck

    Expect to see vast fortunes showered upon
    Egoists who do nothing but dribble a ball
    And actors who play great, noble characters
    But in real life, aren't very noble at all.

    Funny, I just wrote a poem yesterday about how there is a 'no daytime tv' rule in our house. I tend to spend the evenings now reading lovely poetry by talented friends.

  • Still Anonymous
    May 30, 2008

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    I agree with a lot of what you're saying here (though I'm not quite as cynical as you are). The cadence seems erratic which hampers the flow of the poem, but I like the rhyming.

    Still Anonymous


  • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
    May 30, 2008
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    Dang. I forgot the clappies.

  • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
    May 30, 2008

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    This Rant is an excellent poem. I do enjoy some television, but much of it is vapid. In particular I like:

    Expect to see vast fortunes showered upon
    Egoists who do nothing but dribble a ball
    And actors who play great, noble characters
    But in real life, aren't very noble at all.

    and:

    Monkeys with vacant, expressionless faces.
    But every now and then, the monkeys will laugh
    Because of something the box made them feel

    Great job.

    Mike


  • there-goes-my-heart
    May 30, 2008

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    I absolutely love it. (And that's saying a lot, the jadded emo kid proclaiming she "loves it"). A year ago I discovered this, and called the TV a "brain sucker," but was tormented by others for this so I stopped. It's nice to see someone not stopping.
    As I said, I think the whole thing is gorgeous, but I can give you some tips.
    I loved the wordplay of lines 13 and 14:
    "For the more enlightened that you become,
    The less you can tolerate ignorant thinking."
    and of lines 19, 23 & 24, and of the last stanza.
    Now, don't forget comas, they can get you far in life. At the end of several lines, you need a coma. If you'd like to know where, I can tell you.
    I think line 15 needs 3 more sylables. You could use "[life,] your short life," or "[your] meaningless [life]." Those are just examples to show how it flows better when put that way; I don't mean to re-write your poem or anything. If you think it works better that way, good for you. Way to be different.
    Overall, it was brilliant. There was friendly repetition, beautiful words and good thought. Your poem is great. Keep writing.

    Meagan

    • Mark Rickerby gold member
      May 30, 2008
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      Hi Meagen,

      Thanks for the thoughtful comments and advice. I'm glad I could "get your back" on the anti-TV thing. Feel free to refer the people who tormented you about it to this poem. I'll take the heat. lol

      I'll check out those lines. I have nothing against commas, either. Really!

      Take care,

      Mark


  • individuality gold member
    May 30, 2008

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    a good poem with a genuine point, the idiot's lantern, i must be an idiot as i quote from a tv series title with a science fiction programme but yeah, most of the people have tv's and we waste away sat staring at them. we are so conditioned, i have lost my tv many times and missed it, we become accustomed to it being there and when it is not we sulk with boredom - we must be mad.

    • Mark Rickerby gold member
      May 30, 2008
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      lol - your honesty is commendable. I must admit, I own a TV and I also watch it too much, though not as much as most. So, as always, my poems are a smack up the kisser for myself as much as anyone else.

      Thanks,
      Mark


  • james119
    May 30, 2008

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    "idol distraction"... Great double entendre with rich meaning wraped in humour... I love it.

    This poem has a systematic, reasoned feel to it. A clear message presented with a certain wry smile. Kinda reminds me of 'all in fun; the whole in earnest'

    • Mark Rickerby gold member
      May 30, 2008
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      Thanks, James.

      I don't agree with Cindy Sheehan about much, but I did agree when she said most Americans care more about who wins American Idol than what is going on in Iraq, or any of the other big issues facing us. There is a need for distraction and diversion, but there should be a friggin' limit. The average American spends about 20 hours a week watching TV. They could all be wildly talented intellectuals if they put that time to better use. (God, I'm a preachy sum'bitch, ain't I? lol)

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