Bittersweet suspension
Decadence, Darkness, Delirium
Break through the delicate sacrifice
I'm frozen in fear that she'll ruin my life
Her voice is sharp, concise like a dagger
Bathed in the blood of pleasure and recanter
Atavistic galore for the sake of pleasure
Pain slices through the sadistic measures
The confines of my healing heart make me weak
I cannot contain such darkness within me.
She hisses in my ear that he isn't meant for me
That I am nothing without her, without her, I am nothing.
Nothing, nothing, nothing, nothing
Please make it stop this constant bleeding recession
As she breaks away and leaves me gasping in weakness...
In pain, in desperation...
His words like wine on my drunken mind as his hands become mine
And delicately study the perimeter of those mortal confines
Unto baited breaths of sinewed rhyme...
As he breaks away between pulses undefined.
Author notes
....After last night's happenings. 5/30/2008
What'd ya think?
Comments
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I feel that, after reading this, I understand you a little bit better, and certain things make more sense. Beautifully written, as always, with a very strong message that seems to tell of someone looking for a love that sets them free instead of binding them down.
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So, as you already know you're brilliant. I was kind of iffy at the beginning cause of the strong mental images that aren't really my cup of tea. You have a habit of coming on really strong with your words, which isn't a bad thing at all, just very ouch. And though most of the time you're conveying something totally different than what it says the words are still strong.
But god woman, the last stanza was beautiful 8D
Gimme gimme gimme
*takes last stanza home*
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