she is the dreamer
of a promise of love
warmly made and gently kept
and a heart becomes a place of miracles
like fires in the night sky
light knows not time nor wonder
but goes on
across vast seas of darkness
to delight a child with precious memories
her eyes reflect
the beauty of life within
fill space with caring and selfless gifts
to create miracles of every moment
like fires in the night sky
going on …and on
Author notes
Inspired BY: "At the park with my mother" by ArdentMarch
and
"I am not Amanda" by ArdentMarch
In a list
A contest entry
- A Few of my Favorite Things For Tara by Faithbound.
1500 points, ended May 30, 6 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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thank you so much for this...you two are wonderful people & poet friends...
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I'm happy to have inspired this ...I love it, what a beautiful collaboration
and congrats on winning the silver..
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So are you lieve Tara
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"like fires in the night sky
light knows not time nor wonder
but goes on
across vast seas of darkness
to delight a child with precious memories"
Loved this wonderful penning, especially the above lines, congrats.
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Lovely imagery through this.
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Thank you-
for your kind words, and the honor of the trophy, it was a pleasure to write to Tara's work and show appreciation for her art; it was an honor to write with MariGoes in this collaboration...PK
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This is a beautiful reflection. The two of you have captured wonder and hope and yet touch on the truth that it is not so far off...that there is beauty to be found within. I LOVE these words; "fill space with caring and selfless gifts, to create miracles of every moment." AH, so lovely. May we all hold such fires in our eyes.
Wonderfully done collaboration! And two very fine inspiration poems to work from.
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This made me feel warm and wonderful. Great writing!
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Mari-
Thank you for the honor of writing with you, and also nice to write from Tara's poetry, wonderful inspirations...h -
Thanks h for being such a lovely collaborator in poetry.
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Miricles do happen when a mother gives birth to a child. The memories that stem from life that was created are carried throughout ones lifetime! Wonderfully done ...~Sie
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