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Hourglass

Time ticks by with
whispered dreams
Sheets so white
In a tumbled heap

Years fly by
along with seperation
Kisses remembered
Feelings forgotten

You walked by me
I stole a glance
Have I already
lost my chance

Awaken things
from yesterday
Ill tell you this time
that Ill stay

Not even time
with all its strenght
Could take away the
memories we keep

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  • ShaShay
    June 8, 2008

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    touching

    I feel this. You are in a place that is very "iffy" it seems, but hold on to the memories they will be with you forever and cannot turn you down. Great write


  • SummerlandRayne gold member
    June 3, 2008

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    Wonderful ponderings of the soul. Things I have thought of from time to time. Time is fleeting...yes? Thank you for the wonderful entry!!!


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