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Violin

The relics of my art are keeping silent,

and only in revelation and with spirit ear,

can one hear, from the deeps of the crucified violin:

a universal melody,

In unison with eternity...



If my writings make no sense it means there
are writings about sense

Author notes

The violins of Stradivarius are very few in the world. And this one, crucified in the ruins of an ancient civilization, having his mission: to make the ruins rise again and become beautiful and rich and full of duty, as before. Stradivarius- the master of violin worked very hard on creating this violin, as he was working hard in general.

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  • pulsating
    July 18

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    it is deep i agree. reminds me of some painful inner turmoil that plays and resounds eternally.


  • Tirrell gold member
    July 5

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    This is a very deep, and drew me into the depths of it as I read it again and again. it is simply moving.
    It is quietly beautiful


  • Thoughts-of-Soloman gold member
    June 15

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    I cannot but associate this with the actual repairing of violins, as I spent much time doing this only earlier this year. The connection for me is that it is an art which relies on an intuitive feel for what is needed, more so than technical know how. The positioning and shaping of the bridge and positioning of its 'soul', the sound-post.

    I enjoyed this.

    Sol


    • Jalalbad gold member
      August 14
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      the abysses deep and dark
      I tied with bridge and ark
      the velvet forests green
      I baptized with prayer and dream.

  • poeticweaver gold member
    June 8

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    Divine...

    Thanks for sharing the inside scoop with me.
    I love this here, and your weavings are always wonderful.

    Much love.
    -Timothy


  • myrataal silver member
    June 6

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    It is wonderful how those of a feather ...

    flock together!



    I read this and I am just connected to you, do you know, Birdie One?



    Love
    Myra


  • poetryality silver member
    May 31

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    I love the background. I am a bird lover. I do believe that in some past life I was an eagle, hawk, phoenix... I often have dreams of soaring. Flight is fascinating to me.

    There is a whir of "violin" that sings to pain. My sister used to play the viola, and daddy used to complain about the instrument "whining". I feel the abstract nature of your words. A very deep writ here my sister.


    Much Love ♥

    Renee


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar gold member
    May 31

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    Well this is a status of your journey of life written in the heartfelt words..Though in the symbolic language..But that does not change the truth..Rather it increase the intensity of your voice..

    And about the sense of writing..I must share my view that..There are many languages in the world..And poetry itself is one of the most difficult language not only in terms of it's scripting, but as well as its communication as well..to me I understand fully your poetry and that is always great and very introvert as well..Well done my friend..

  • Bob Fox
    May 30

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    Judy

    Lol I think you , ast times, write above the norm and we have to ponder. The violin as a heart pushed aside and filled with loneliness or is it just a way of saying I am very deep


  • Angelo di Luce gold member
    May 30

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    One needs spiritual ears to hear the melody

    of the sphears, that keep the Univers

    in motion to Eternity

    Inspiring write Judy

    Love Nick.

     

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