I scream and scream but no words come out,
I'm setting in this room crying but no sound is heard,
I feel pain and the darkness is taking over the night
but no light will shine through the window.
I scream to the top of my lugs in this room filled with my close's friends, but yet no one can hear me.
I smile to hided the pain thats with in,
The mask is so thick with makeup I can't even take it off,
when the mask comes off the real life is shown.
With her black eyes and red permit cheeks her lips are black with cuts,
I scream and scream but no words will come out.
Author notes
just felling sad and full of pain..
A contest entry
- POINTS- Easy Entries by NickelleteXninja.
600 points, ended July 8, 2008, 45 entries
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Thats a very beautiful pome but I wish you would have made maybe a third stanza
its like you were really going somewhere with it and then you just ended
I think this poem could have been an extremel brilliant wokr of art
If only you would have continued it more...
Do you see what i am saying?
Thanks so much for entering though
It was still a great poem -
awasome
wow i loved tat your realy good i could almost see that in my head keep writing -
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real pain
thank you its all most a real life thing.. the mask is and the screaming inside and no one will hear me so thank you for your comment.
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