Untamed nature
Freedom touching skies
Uniting with land afar
Oceanic waters swirl and sway
In rhythms of tides and waves
With a big heart
It makes home for many creatures
Hiding them in its depths
Tendering them with life of beauty
Emerging big waves
Flag democratic freedom
Playing to the tunes of days
Tides smile without alterations
Uninhibited waves stand tall
On the bed of ocean
Painting liquid mountains
Spattered with blues, grays and greens
Vast oceans capture the breath
Silently they play the music
As waters stir the waves
…Listening to ocean sounds
Heart fills with joy
Mind lives the amazement of Nature
God’s creation
Where ocean is a true symbol of freedom
Flagging the waves with pride,
Head held high
In the midst of vast oceans
I let my fears drown
As the waves hold me tight gently
Author notes
That's how ocean makes me feel.
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A contest entry
- About the ocean by Uglyblackdog.
450 points, ended June 3, 2008, 12 entries
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Comments
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A wonderful message about the ocean! I like the idea of a democratic ocean, washing up on every shore. Well said, and I think you should be proud of this poem.
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Yes
The ocean calms me as well. This poem is very good visual.
Same calming effect in words. Very good!.
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Made me feel I was one with the ocean...very good!!
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REFRESHING AND LOVELY!!!!
Yes, the ocean is home to millions of creatures and it many wonders brings calm and peace to us who stop and let its beauty into our hearts.
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