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Seduction

"Enter if you dare
My allure is extremely rare
Enticement is my game
Delilah is my name"

"I will thrill you with my power
but death ensnares within the hour"

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Temptation by Musical Manipulators

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  • The Drifter
    August 26, 2008
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    Seduction

    Sounds like the Way I would want to go--It would be a good end.
    For everthing there is a price to pay--we must ask--is it wirth it? I say "Yes" take the chance.
    An excellent write--flows wonderfully. Keep up the good work.
    bw


  • mysticstorm gold member
    May 31, 2008

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    Great flow...the words just roll through ones lips with no effort...very effective and creative...thank you for sharing!