I've got wings on my shoulders
Pink slippers on my toes
A yellow halo on my mind
And thoughts nobody knows
A pure white glowing gown
With sparkles of the dew
And a very special
Message for a few
Love one another
And be kind every day
Sacred vows of promises
Just might come your way
Reach into your heart
And share a kind reply
You just might capture
someone's needed sigh
I've got a fire-breathing mouth
And knowing eyes of flaming red
Long blonde hair that catches
Rays of sunshine on my head
Lofty graceful movements
As I fly myself around
And I've got the greatest
Secrets to be found
If you'll give away your smiles
Your whole face will surely glow
Stand up for the common man
Your happiness will grow
Change the channel quickly
Because you don't like the flies
Your heart will tug your
Conscience all your life
I've got a heart on my face
And a dagger in my hand
To give a twofold message
To the sons of mortal man
A Kingdom sits in judgement
And he's got a book or two
What will the verdict be
When he reads you
I've got a purging lake of fire
That I hold in my palm
I will hand it to you my beloved
For an honest song
I will share with you two secrets
That so very few believe
Hell is a lie from Satan
All Creation will be saved
Author notes
Prompt # 21~ God is so in your face: Bart Simpson
This is what I believe. Everything we do, think, say, feel, how we treat others will all come back to us, by Gods decrees, eventually.
Hell is a fable drawn from scripture, It's not really teaching eternal torture.
Look up the original meanings of the word... Hell
It's very enlightening. God's whole purpose for us was to be a part of his family.
We all will be, ~~~eventually.
There is an effect to every cause. It's called Justice, and justice doesn't equal eternal fire for sins when they've already been canceled. Jesus died for the whole world. The wages of sin is death. It's already been done. Forgiveness please if any are upset.
We are all, in fact, brothers and sisters. This is why we are not to judge one another,
We are all in the same boat, the boat is called Sin.
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Awh this was so adorable -
I lovelovelove the way it started out, all princessy and cutesy, like it was a small child speaking -
and then graudally got more serious, it made me think of the child's life passing by, as they grew older and their thoughts / way of wording changed!
Nice job - thanks for entering
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This is beautiful. I love the way it's written and the message it brings.
Goes perfect with the prompt.
Thank you for entering.
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Verry well put.
More people need to head and listen thank you for your love...mac
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"Love one another
And be kind every day
Sacred vows of promises
Just might come your way
Reach into your heart
And share a kind reply
You just might capture
someone's needed sigh"
...Sighhh.
Wonderful Words, Sister! 
~ Nicky♥
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An encouraging write on your beliefs. I felt the flow was out in places but it was a nice uplifting read. Thank you for sharing your thoughts...alby
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very sweet and I bet you do.
God bless...
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Thanks for the comment on Angelael
I finally finished it.
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