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Very Good Indeed

I can make you crawl in your skin
You have pushed me too far
I don’t care any more
You just think im a whore but
I am much much more
When you pushed me down
I didn’t frown
To me you look like a clown
Go ahead and cut me up
you look at me and say
very good indeed
you tear the tape off my mouth
And warn me not to shout
I pretend to pout
you look at me like im crazy
well maybe I am baby
I tell you your breath stinks
and you slap me
I tell you go ahead rape me
and you finally get off of me
I smirk at you
and your eyes get wide with fear
you realize I got my hands untied
and you become paralized
you scream as I grab the knife
I just laugh
you plead and beg for your life
I glare and ask
how does it feel to
end a life?
I slit your throat and watch
you bleed
very good indeed.

I was in a very bad mood......

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  • Rovingone gold member
    July 1, 2008

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    EEEE, I fell like I just watched a slasher movie, or revenge. You certainly have a way with words. Made my skin crawl. Wow!