When below,
we raised you up,
so you could breathe,
and now that you are free,
you stand upon us mockingly,
With promise all left unfulfilled,
we sink into the sea of names,
while you move on,
and forgot all of us,
who allowed you to fly.
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A contest entry
- 10/10 Quickie by buffsab99.
600 points, ended May 30, 2008, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wow, this was great, a completely different take to mine on the prompt but still a very powerful take on it. Congratulations on earning an HM!!
Keep up the great work!
Himler
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Excellent
Great job with this write. I think you meant forget instead of forgot but trust me i make plenty of typos myself. Best of luck in this contest
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I really felt this it shows in your words
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