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Joey

Wait for me, lost friend,
through this sweet country air.
Toiling in the garden,
Walking in these trees.

Wait for me, lost friend,
through that salty sea breeze.
Baking in the sun,
Drifting in that far away water.

Wait for me, lost friend,
through the grateful desert storm.
Observing the animals scurry,
Huddling beneath warm shelter.

Wait for me, lost friend,
through those wispy cirrus puffs.
Floating on gentle wind currents,
Watching above lone Earth.

Wait for me, lost friend,
through my dreams of waiting for you.
Avoiding the friends and faces,
Trying to wait in peace.

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  • MysticalxMari
    August 5, 2008

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    Very beautiful Miranda. I can't believe I never read this one, it's very nice. It makes my heart shatter, until a thousand pieces.


  • Maxboy gold member
    July 16, 2008

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    Very Nice!!
    Congratulations on the Bronze Thophy, you earned it.


  • enitsirhC
    June 21, 2008

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    This is really good
    I like it a lot!

    Good luck in your contest!


  • LadyLuff
    June 15, 2008
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    aww great poem!!


  • Blooming Poet
    June 15, 2008
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    Beautiful. Quite sad.

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