The children are awakened every day to be put down profound by a careless society.
The words that we speak are useless in the eyes of superiors to them we are inferior but look at our interiors. We have a mind and visions too. The mistakes we make reflect us not you. So what to do with our voice lock it away in poetry. The only way we can be free. So now without knowing you listened to me.
A contest entry
- The voice that goes unheard by Starz of Heaven.
525 points, ended June 3, 2008, 24 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - For New and Trophy Lacking by Blooming Poet.
300 points, ended July 16, 2008, 61 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I would appreciate feedback regardless of what it is im just looking to improve my poetry
Comments
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wow, this is, wow.
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I do like your message that you have brought for in this poem thank you for taking the time to enter my contest and speak up best wishes and much luck
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